You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to help you Say how the course will be useful for your job

A couple of days ago, when I was entering into office saw a piece of news on the bulletin board about

education

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an education

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plan, which will be beneficial for my progress as a medical engineer .
Recently, the company has imported new models of dialysis

machines

from

German

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Germany

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. I_m unfamiliar with those because have advanced structures and systems. For

this

reason, I really want you to make an arrangement to send me German for learning the new version of

machines

clearly.
I need to learn

German

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the German

The noun phrase German language seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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language and the association can hold a course

for

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on

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it.

Also

, they should reserve a hotel there and make a coordinate.
If I learn completely the dialysis

machines

structure can transform

this

knowledge to other staff. Apart from that, when the

machines

were damaged, for fixing them it is not necessary to send it back. I can fix them well.
I hope that you consider my concerns about my job.

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