You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter 1. Describe the problem with the equipment. 2. Explain how this problem is affecting your work. 3. Say what you want the shop or company to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to let you know that I am certainly not satisfied with the laptop I have been using, While the keyboard and the charging cable is working completely fine, I am facing issues with the screen which is going off or turning blank making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably.

Let me explain my situation. The trouble started 15 days ago, while I was working on an important excel sheet. Prior to

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it_s been 6 months since I have bought the product and have never faced any consequences. The problem is affecting my daily tasks as I do not have a habit of saving

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regular time intervals. I have to restart the laptop once the screen turns blank

I_d like the company to check the laptop and come up with a solution by either replacing / repairing the same.

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, I would request to take a backup of the data beforehand which in turn will not affect time in

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future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Parin Mehta

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