You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with the

room

allotted to me. The

room

itself is fine, but

intolerable

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activities of my roommate make me difficult to work. I am hopeful of receiving your support in

this

matter.

The main problem I am facing is that my fellow mate plays loud music during the evening time, which is my study time and disrupts my concentration completely.

Further

, he invites his friends to our

room

for the weekend party. It becomes difficult to sleep during those days.

As a result

of which I feel

sleep deprived

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all the time. I have requested him several times but in vain. My academic record is declining day by day, which is a serious issue of concern for me.

Keeping my condition in mind, I hope you will help me. I request you to either give me a new

room

or get me a new fellow mate. In either case, I require a quieter

room

or an understanding roommate.

I hope you will understand the urgency of my problem and help me.

Yours Faithfully,
Jack Jones

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