Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with the
allotted to me. The
itself is fine, but
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activities of my roommate make me difficult to work. I am hopeful of receiving your support in
The main problem I am facing is that my fellow mate plays loud music during the evening time, which is my study time and disrupts my concentration completely.
, he invites his friends to our
for the weekend party. It becomes difficult to sleep during those days.
of which I feel
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all the time. I have requested him several times but in vain. My academic record is declining day by day, which is a serious issue of concern for me.
Keeping my condition in mind, I hope you will help me. I request you to either give me a new
or get me a new fellow mate. In either case, I require a quieter
or an understanding roommate.
I hope you will understand the urgency of my problem and help me.
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