You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college.

I am writing to City Evening College in reference to an advertisement I saw in The Vancouver Sun on May 14th for

language

teachers at your college.

I am interested in teaching

Korean

and

Korean

Cookery

. I have seen that your guide for

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term does not include these courses, but I understand there are now large numbers of

second

and

third

-generation Koreans living in

this

part of the city who may be keen to learn more about their

language

and culture.

I have a Bachelor of Science degree and a teaching diploma. I hold special qualifications in

language

teaching and

cookery

. I was a science teacher in Korea

,

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but moved to San Francisco in 2010. There, I taught

Korean

for Beginners and

Korean

Cookery

at two community colleges. The

language

course assumed students had no prior knowledge of

Korean

. It gave them simple everyday

language

, as well as recognition of the alphabet. The

cookery

course focused on easy meal preparation and the art of pickling, or

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.

In Vancouver, I could teach the same courses as previously, or we could devise new ones, depending on what the college considered its market to be.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Kim Stevenson

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