You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say – How would you be able to help? – When and why would you do it? – Who will help you to do it?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I was one of the visitors to the

school

last

week. I had a great weekend and writing to let you know that

school

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the school

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needs renovation and some

activities

, willing to help my colleagues.

I noticed that

second

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building wall paintings are completely washed away and

physical

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the physical

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teacher will be on leave for

next

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the next

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two months. I am part of the Social Club of our company and we regularly

carry-out

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some

activities

to help in the community. With your

permission

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it is a pleasure to help the

school

and enrich our locality.

On Saturdays, we can conduct some of the

activities

for kids like games, sports and excursions. We will ensure to take care of the

activities

planned by

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on

this

day.

Similarly

, we can paint on Sundays where there won_t be a

school

and can avoid any potential damage to the kids.

I Have already discussed with my club mates

of

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the above plan and are excited to

do

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. We will make a detailed plan for the

next

two months with volunteers and shall share

if

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you permit us.

Awaiting

for

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your confirmation.

Yours Sincerely,

Sumanth

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