You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

10 April 2022 IELTS IN EASY STEPS Writing 0

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Dear Sir,

Firstly

, please accept my apology because of a previous appointment I could not come at the

time

you wish. I am really sorry about wasting

your

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time

and efforts which your team took for that session.

Each

day

I do spend a lot of

time

while dealing with

study

. For me

study

hols an important human value. Actually, on the same

day

, I am busy with

doctor_s

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appointment

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because my mother is unwell. It is equally important to meet a

doctor

. I firmly believe that it

my

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responsibility but due to

this

situation I am feeling helpless.

Can I suggest another

day

for an

interview

? In the

next

week

, I will

completely

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available. Please let me know about

tests

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which

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will be carrying during the

interview

.

This

week

I mostly

to

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suffer stress

issue

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at a great level. Even though

time

changes and students do vary in their opinions I think only positive efforts can bring more benefits. You can contact me at any

time

. Once again please accept my sorry.

Each

day

I do spend a lot of

time

while dealing with

study

. For me

study

hols an important human value. Actually, on the same

day

, I am busy with

doctor_s

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a doctor_s

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appointment

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appointments

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because my mother is unwell. It is equally important to meet a

doctor

. I firmly believe that it

my

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is my

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responsibility but due to

this

situation I am feeling helpless.

Can I suggest another

day

for an

interview

? In the

next

week

, I will

completely

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be completely

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available. Please let me know about

tests

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the tests

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which

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that

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will be carrying during the

interview

.

This

week

I mostly

to

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apply

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suffer stress

issue

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issues

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at a great level. Even though

time

changes and students do vary in their opinions I think only positive efforts can bring more benefits. You can contact me at any

time

. Once again please accept my sorry.

Look forward to seeing you.

Yours faithfully,

Kailash Kamble.

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