You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

I am writing to express my disappointment in the accommodation arranged for me. I am


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3 months medical lab course.

The main problem I have with the accommodation is the fact that it is a shared room with three other adult students.

In addition

, the room is extremely small in size.

The initial arrangement agreed upon was to get an ensuite 2-bedroom apartment to share with just one student. Unfortunately, I got




apartment is not conducive for me because it is overcrowded and quite stuffy.

As a result



, I do have my asthma attack reoccurring.

I would be grateful if you could find a more conducive apartment as agreed.


, if


is not possible, I would suggest a refund so as to make

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with another agent.

I hope the situation will be resolved as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Adesina Morenike

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