You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the services

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing

you

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to you

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to express my deep gratitude splendid time which I

have

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tohave

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spend

on

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in

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your restaurant on my friend_s

birthday

. It was a busy Saturday night of

last

week, we were twenty

peoples

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people

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dropped there to celebrate my friend_s 36th

birthday

.
Arup was our childhood friend and rarely

we

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do we

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get time to celebrate any occasion. But Arup_s

birthday

was on

last

Saturday, so we planned to visit your restaurant and store some valuable memories in our

heart

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hearts

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.
As we have just dropped to your restaurant without any reservation. We have expressed our plan to your receptionist and she was very helpful as she was able to provide a private hall within fifteen minutes. All the staffs are generous and suggestive for our evening snacks and dinner. Foods are very

testy

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tasty

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and hot

in

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at

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reasonable

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a reasonable

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price. We are amazed, overwhelmed and surprised when your chef gave us

giant

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a giant

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cake

at

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apply

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free of cost for Arup_s

birthday

.
I will decently recommend to everyone for your service and delicious food to visit your place.
Please feel free to publish

this

letter in your customer survey circulation and contact me if you need any more feedback.
Thanking you,
With Faithfully
Kuntal Mondal

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