Write about the following topic. It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days development in

tourism

and technology increasing day by day

furthermore

, nowadays there is a huge trend in

tourism

and research in far

places

such

as the south pole.

However

, there is

a

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pros and cons of everything in

this

essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

traveling

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to

remote

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a remote

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natural environment.

Let begin with the advantage of the visit to the eco nature.

Firstly

,

scientists

are finding new spices thereby we know about our planet more. what I mean to say, there are so many new spices, plants out there and we still don_t know about them, so we gonna find about more.

For instance

, recently

scientists

found

about

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a black frog, which is unique.

this

frog

first

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time sees in the Africa jungle and

scientists

found it more

this

hybrid.

Secondly

, Nowadays

people

want to explore more. Folks are more attracted to the South pole Because there is an adventure, natural environment, fun, and quiet.

For example

, many

people

try to find quiet

places

owing to the population. now hill station ,

also

beaches have too much crowd so

people

avoid to visit there and find another place.

On the other hand

,

tourism

impact is not good in these

places

.

For Instance

, tourists make things worst for spices.

People

disturb their lifestyle

also

sometimes they harm them.

Scientists

also

do their research but that causes their natural environment. So many

places

ruined since

tourism

and

scientists

go. So for the safety of these

places

, it is

a

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virtual to not go these

places

.

In conclusion,

this

development is important for us but harmful for these animals and plants for

there

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safety and protection we should not go there.

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