Write about the following topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many

languages

die out annually. It is argued by some individuals that

this

is not crucial as life will be comfortable if there are few

languages

in the world. I do not agree with

this

notion as it may be convenient regarding the ways we communicate

,

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but at the cost of rich cultural values.

The linguistic heritage of each nation dictates the way any society thrive with rich cultural values, which is not possible in a foreign

language

.

Languages

spoken locally affords an opportunity for the transfer of the traditional methods of living together.

For instance

, the Tamil

language

spoken in India keep the society in a well-connected bond of love and affection, which will fade away if the

language

is lost to a new

language

.

Secondly

, it is difficult to pass values in a foreign

language

to offspring, which will be detrimental to any culture.

On the other hand

, a reduction in the number of

languages

spoken may lead to a way of communication. It is believed that

this

trend will make communication easy by removing

language

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barrier.

For example

, when a person goes abroad he will not be needing to learn a foreign

language

if he speaks the same

language

.

Hence

,

this

will make things easy for everyone,

however

, the cost society has to pay in the form of loss in culture would be significant.

Finally

, the volume of history written in a certain

language

will be on the verge of extinction, if that

language

dies out.

In conclusion, fewer

languages

may make it easy to communicate but

this

will be at the expense of loss in cultural value and rich historical facts.

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