Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Dear Prakash,
How are you doing buddy? It is a long time we interacted.

This

letter is for inviting you

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the music concert happening in my city, details are below.
I_m writing

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for the purpose of inviting

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for

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Shreya Ghoshal_s musical concert happening in my city, Bangalore on 23 April 2020 at 9 pm. It is at the stadium, I_ve already booked tickets for you and me

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because I am sure you will be coming to attend your favourite singer_s programme.
There will be western and classical music, for western music, a singer named Janet is landing on the same date, and for classical and Bollywood songs, our Shreya will be performing. There are duets too, and

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to meet in person with rock stars.
In college, we used to attend many

such

concerts, including

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and

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too. It will be great fun to refresh the memories. In the busy schedule

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full of stress because of business and office, I thought it will be a rejuvenating experience for both of us. I am very sure that you will be jumping with joy

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this

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Let_s meet soon.
Best regards,

Sumant

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