write a letter to you friend for missing his birthday celebration

Dear friend,

I hope you are doing fine and my belated

birthday

wishes. I am writing here to say sorry for not attending the

birthday

Celebration

due to my tight work schedule.

I am feeling a bit down and want to express from the depths of my heart how sorry

i

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am for not being

the

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a

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part of your

birthday

celebration

. I feel extremely bad for missing to spend the special day with my dear friend and create lifetime memories.And

also

i

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should have

informed

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been informed

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that

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you that

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i

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wouldn_t make it because our friendship deserves that notification.I beg for your forgiveness.

I should definitely give

explanation

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an explanation

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for whatever happened that day.I could not attend the

birthday

celebration

because of my work deliverable.You see, my

Boss

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boss

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walked in and demanded me to complete the work which is due for

next

week on high priority and finish it off on the same day. I happened to stay in my office beyond working hours to complete and share it with business.When

i

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finally

took my head out of the sand,

i

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couldn_t believe your

birthday

party was almost over.I did not get a chance to inform you as well that

i

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will not be attending your

celebration

.

To heal any wounds from my absence,

i

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want to take you out for dinner at your

favorite

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favourite

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restaurant Rain Forest and from there we will head to the theatre and check out for a new movie. Based on your availability, we will plan for the

next

weekend. Kindly let me know if you are fine with it.
Talk to you soon my friend.Until

then

Take care.
Shiva.

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