Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Serious crimes need capital punishment so that the offender

are

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will be
is

unable to get involved in the crime in the future.

However

, If they want to stop the acts of violation in the

future

Accept comma addition
future, then

then

it would be better to forget him and judge him for a change

.

Accept space
.

Recently, the demands of natural resources have risen dramatically across the world due to population growth. Some people state that we have not enough resources.

However

, there are some individuals who disagree with

this

opinion. In

this

essay, the issues behind

this

phenomenon will be examined.

On the one hand, some people state that if the number of natural

resource

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resources

will continue to

degrease

decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease

we cannot have a comfortable life because natural resources are limited. According to a government research in the USA shows that if

this

situation will continue, the petrol will lose in 2050.

Moreover

, it is widely said that the number of population in the world will increase.

This

will make the amount of natural resource decrease.

On the other hand

, there are some individuals who disagree with

above

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the above

-mentioned perception. The demands of natural resources will be

lessen

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lessened

owning to improving the technology.

For example

, the developments of technology

such

as electronic cars gave a positive impact in the society. By using

this

, we can decline the consumption of natural resources. Eventually, we will not need natural fuel. In my opinion, decreasing of natural resource is quite crisis, I think the loss of it give a negative impact in the society because even we won_t have a comfortable life any more.

In conclusion, I agree with the idea that there

is

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are

no longer enough natural resources to sustain

this

situation. In order to

defense

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defend
defence
define

our life, the governments every

countries

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country

should tackle

this

issue.

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