A dramatic increase in the number of
relying on fast
as their main meals of the day. In my opinion, it has positive and negative effects of consuming fast
, and I will explain these points in the forthcoming paragraphs, before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
There are several advantages
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consuming fast
as the main meal nowadays.
, fast
saves time and easy to cook as many
have busy schedule no time to home-cook
.
, working parents can cook
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in a minute and they do not need any cooking skills.
, most of the
prefer to eat fast
while doing their stuff, like
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driving, watching TV and others.
, it is apparent why
are favouring fast
rather than home-cooked
.
, replacing proper meals to fast
may lead to many health problems. Because
contains
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igher level of sugar and no nutritional values, which can cause cancer, diabetes, obesity and many more. If
neglect to have the right combination of these nutrients, it will be very difficult to live a healthy lifestyle. In
case, most fast foods
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additive and preservatives.
In conclusion,
many
are depending on fast
because of their hectic lifestyle.
, if
taking an
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amount of fast-
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may lead to many health problems.
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