Presently, A large group of
choose to eat fast
for their main courses. From my point of view, there are a
of drawbacks to eating fast
every day.
On the one hand, every country around the world has a
of fast
as hamburgers, pizzas and etc., and
love to eat them in every main dishes because there are many benefits.
, it can take away and easy more than eat at restaurants.
, the
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price is cheaper than the restaurants.
, they can full just
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ew junk
because there are many carbohydrates.
, some
do not know what they want to eat, so the main idea that everyone thinks is about fast
, so they just buy only a piece of hamburger, they can enough in every meal.
, more and more
believe that eating a
of fast
is unhealthy because they do not have nutrients more than foods.
, some
who eat a
kind
, they will not have
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good
as fat problem, so in the main meals, they should
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eat other foods rather than junk
to protect their
and for do not have any
problems in the future.
To sum up, in the present, a
of
choose to eat fast
in every their meal and I think that eating junk
every day has many drawbacks
as
problems.
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