Tourism is an ever growing industry.what benefits it brings to society and individual

nowadays

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Nowadays

there is

an

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a

growing in

tourism

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the tourism industry

industry

.

there

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There

are so many benefits

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it can bring to both

society

and individual.

the

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The

several benefits are presented below

there

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There

are many benefits it can bring to

society

.

in

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In

the

first

place, ever growing

tourism

industry

can make the

society

more wealthy because there are several travellers who from both native and foreign countries buy things in one

society

which they travel

such

as several

souveniers

something of sentimental value
souvenirs

that very meaningful

in

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In

the

second

place, the growing

tourism

industry

give

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gives

a valuable chance to let people who from different backgrounds exchange their

cultures

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culture

.

the

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The

tourism

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tourists

can

also

give the types of the benefits to

individual

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individuals
the individual
an individual

.

the

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The

first

aspect that we can see easily is that individual person who want to go overseas can have more convenient travelling process because with the

industry

growing

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,

the many

tourism

services developed.

the

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The

second

aspect that

deserve

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deserves

to say is that with the

tourism

industry

developing, make the people

experience

different cultures more easily than ever before

as a result

,

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people
Poles

who live in 21centuries

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have a more chance to

experience

the culture that differ from them.

actually it

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Actually it

is very helpful to

individual person

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the individual person
individual persons
individual people

to learn and

experience

different cultures and societies

now

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Now

we live in 21centuries

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,

with the

tourism

industry

growing

,

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,

it is giving valuable benefits to both

society

and individual.

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People
Pole
Poole
Peole

can easily

experience

different cultures which they very strange for and give the chance to travel overseas more convenient.

the

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The

benefits that can give to

society

and individual are too many to list all

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however i

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however I

believe there will be much

more benefits

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more beneficial
more benefit

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