I am writing
letter to formally bring to your notice that your
that shuttles between Aka road and Abak road at a service route for residents in Power City Estate has really been disappointing us for the past two weeks.
It is with great displeasure that I bring to your notice the tension and delay your transportation system have caused me for over two weeks now through her disappointment. It is annoying that your driver arrival the
stop very late these days knowing that many of us living in
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and have to leave our location on time in other to beat the traffic. Not only that, every morning, they will never cease to stop by the filling station to buy fuel which ends up spending quality time on a spot because the queue is always unspeakable early hours of the day.
attitude by your drivers is beginning to affect the trust I have for your service because I cannot imagine waking up as early as 5:30am and get to the office by 10am. It is unacceptable and against our company ethics.
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I have received
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from my manager which the feedback from the
one was a threat for 2 weeks suspension.
salary was not complete because of my lateness to work. So it is very frustrating that your
service is having
negative effect on me.
In my opinion, I will advise that your driver responsible for my route should be cautioned and let him know that my
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have gotten to that management or an alternative could be getting us a disciplined and coordinated driver.
, your drivers should learn to fill the vehicle_s tanks in the night against the
morning to ensure
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passengers are early at work.
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they should develop the habit of leaving their houses on time so as to arrive
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I hope my letter will be looked into and as well given
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due consideration. Thanks in anticipation.
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