There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Manager,

My name is Marco Milani and I am writing

this

epistle to grab your attention about the problems I have been facing

since

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two weeks with your

bus

service. I live on Airport Road and usually takes 30 number

bus

, which

direct

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go to Bramalae

Bus

terminal. I have been using your

bus

service for

past

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5 years, but it is very unfortunate to say that your

bus

service is no more accurate.

First

of all, I want to let you know that some of the

bus

drivers are not punctual of time and most of the time, they skip my area route. My office time is 9 AM and it takes me 20 minutes to reach there, but whenever the

bus

is late or skip my area route, I get late to the work and

this

lead

a

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bad impact on my employee report. Another issue is with the

bus

ticket

charges

. The regular ticket

charges

are $5 but sometimes the driver

charges

$2 extra without any justification.

Not even me, most the passengers are affected due to these problems. By going late at work is affecting my profile and paying extra on regular ticket

charges

is not worth

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all. These problems are creating daily basis issues and losing your customers who connect with your company for many years.

I would like to suggest you that kindly look into

this

matter and keep an eye on your daily drivers report so that your

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well reputed

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company may not bother the passengers.

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Sincerely,

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