The below table highlights
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of the workforce in the US based on their origin over the past
year. The report consists of a total statistic of the female and male teams. The
data shows the total figure of
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of foreign origin while the
analysis was related to US nationality.
, the table begins with data that provided the foreign employment status in the US
year. The total figure of
in the workforce was 24,357 while the majority of works were dominated by males compared to females.
, the ratio of unemployment was higher in females with 11.1%.
, it had predicted that the most participated
were between the ages of 35-44 which
highlighted the lowest rate of 9.0 % of unemployment.
table analysis the figures for total
of US nationality over the
year. The total of the workforce was 129,533
, among the total personnel
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67,610 was male and the remained was female. Male
were higher in all the aspects including employed, unemployed and even the rate of percentage. The range of the ages of the
was above the age of 16 years old,
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the unemployment rate was more by 18.7%.
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