The quality of the health care a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

television plays a major role in children life.I agree with both points,it has a bad effect on them and the other side is it useful in man ways.

to begin

with,children watch television all day.it has a negative impact on their health.consider an example of a child watching it from morning to evening,it will cause eyesight. and there are some shows which will misguide them in many ways.many advertisements are misleading the younger generation.take an example of an axe advertisement,in that video when the person uses the spray immediately girls will come to him by smelling the accent of that product.after seeing

this

one

so many people from younger

ones

to adults started buying

this

perfume.as in

result

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their sales were increased by wasting the money of their beloved customers.

in contrast

to

this

,there are many shows like entertainment,education,geographical and more on the list.they play a great role in life ,the

first

one

gives relaxation when you are watching their comedy.whenever you feel distressed or stressed just watch

one

.when it comes to educational

ones

they provide a lot of examples in the real world related to their topic.the

last

one

tells about nature importance,how to use them,what happens if we misuse them.there are many shows that are very useful and helpful.

to conclude,it has a vast amount of information which is being displayed every day,it is up to you to choose between them.the right

ones

will guide you to good.while the bad

ones

have a negative impact on your life.pick wisely.

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