The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine, Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

State

funds

should be increased more for the

prevention

of health problems rather than for treatment and medicine. In my opinion, I agree that government funding ought to be increased in healthcare

prevention

, as

this

will greatly benefit both individuals and society.

A good reason to raise

funds

for

prevention

is that precaution gives

people

, from all walks of life whether rich or poor, equal rights.

In other words

, if preventive care services are not funded, a lot fewer

people

will have access to them because they are unable to pay for the service.

This

excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid of healthcare fees.

Another point to consider is that increased

funds

for healthcare precaution will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that more

prevention

means

more

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healthy population.

This

will result in decreasing the number of ill

people

and, as a consequence, the need for treatment and medicine.

For instance

, there has been a high percentage reduction in the sale of cigarettes after the government launched the campaign where it decided to print on every single packet of cigarettes pictures of consequences of smoking in our body.

This

has helped both states and

people

to save money which

otherwise

would have gone into treating illnesses related to smoking.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that health is the greatest asset of a nation and that authorities should spend more on encouraging

prevention

as it will help

people

to stay healthy and to save money on medical bills.

Moreover

, the cost of increased

funds

for

prevention

will be recovered many times over by the benefits

this

will bring.

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