The position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arises from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

From the past until the

last

century, the vast majority of women stayed at home to look after their children and only a very small percentage of them had to

work

or do any outdoor activity in many countries.

However

,

this

custom had changed in the

last

20 years and many women now go to

work

, run their shops or businesses or even

work

as managers in some multinational companies. Of course,

this

significant change has had good and bad impacts on everyday life. From my point of view, the disadvantages of

this

trend surpass the advantages it offers. Actually,

this

issue has to be discussed delicately.

When the mother leaves her house, she has two choices: the

first

is to leave her house and children without

care

, and that of course is unacceptable. The other choice, and it_s not better than the

first

one, is to get someone to looks after her children and do the housework.

There are some reasons that may lead women to

work

, but the main reason is that: most married women who are employed or have their own business, need money to live an acceptable life. In my opinion,

this

is the husbands_ responsibility and they shouldn_t involve their wives in the task because

this

eventually leads to tragic consequences. Their children don_t get enough

care

and time with parents and that lead in the long term disorder in the society.

From the psychological point of view, if the children don_t get enough

care

during the childhood, they may not be able to interact properly with people around them. Some people claim that “preventing women from

work

and not letting them earning money is a type of injustice “; but I don_t think so. When a mother prevents her child from getting her

care

and affections,

this

is the injustice.

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