The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.

In the past,

community

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in each area on the earth were set in terms of prioritized orders. The higher-level people,the loyal family, have more priority than the lower,the farmer.

In addition

, diversities of society

such

as colours of skin, sexes, and outlook are discriminated against widely, so

such

community would like to do as sexism,racism, and so on have seen so far.

Women

were treated unequally because they were stereotyped as weak, chore people, uneducated people. Human rights and sex equality in the present are taught as well as the position of

women

is prioritized more.

However

, many problems arise.

For example

,children are not raised properly because of lacking time for

wife

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.

The

women

for now have equality like

men

. They should have the right to do things that fellow are able to do.

For example

, many occupations require only guy employees, as well as the ability of some

women

,

women

are preferable. Many problems are managed better by the

women

due to their thinking and experience. In the several positions, many experts are

women

who drive the company in the directions

such

as scientists, CEOs, singers, writers and so on. 

Some always think that the position of woman is only doing chores, raising kids and sewing clothes, the woman things. The sets of thinking are quite obsoleted. Chores or house working are done by everybody in the house, either

men

or

women

. Raising children as the best result is a cooperation between both dad and mom. If kids were taught the only mon , they would not know knowledge from one position.

Women

have the authority to do work and anything else they want. Meanwhile,

men

should help to raise their children.

This

is not the problem of

women

these days.

In conclusion, Human rights and sex equality are necessary as the basis of living nowadays. Either

women

or

men

have the right to do anything they want. Sex should not be the limit. The abilities should be determined

instead

. Avoiding raising kids is not the problem of

women

but the problem of society.

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