The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued by some that better education at home by parents is the only way to fight the growing crime rate of juvenile offenders.

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essay completely disagrees with that statement. In my opinion, better education for mutual respect at

schools

and limitation of the negative impact of social media

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far more important in order to solve the

above mentioned

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issue.

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,

schools

should invest much more

on

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teaching

children

the importance of mutual respect and caring for your community, rather than just teaching math or biology. Young adults spend most of their time at school and

therefore

it is vital that education programs will

also

include aspects

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tolerance towards others.

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,

schools

can have

an

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obligatory community service for every student once a week.

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way young adults can obtain different perspectives on society and on the significance of helping others.

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, social media must take more

responsibilty

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and limit the amount of violence embedded in its content. Social platforms

such

as YouTube and

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regulalry

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display offending and violent videos that could inspire other young adults to act

violentely

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themselves.

For instance

, a video of

children

abusing and hurting a cat can spread quickly to a large number of viewers, some of

them

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children

who might want to repeat the same horrific act themselves.

In conclusion, some may argue that parents are the only ones that are responsible for reducing the crime rate of young offenders, via better parenting skills. I believe that

schools

and social media

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greater

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influence on the behaviour of young

children

and

thus

should take

responsibilty

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as well in order to fight that serious subject.

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