The growing number of overweight people is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extend do you agree?

In

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time, the problems which increase a

rapidly

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population of overweight

people

causes

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for the health care system, many

people

advocate that the

kay

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to solving

this

issue is to do more

sports

game in

fitness

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club and exercise in schools. I completely agree that

thus

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this

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best way for

improve

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healthy

life

and avoided the issue of bad health in relation

with

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to

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weight.

Firstly

, dealing with the issues surrounding obesity and

over weight

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problem that

happen

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when the many

people

going wrong with style

life

eating.

In addition

, the best

solving

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for those cases when we

are care

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about do athletics and exercise practice

on

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in

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sports

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club. Because of

this

,

that is

will growing new generation with the better healthier and will not

moving

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into

bad

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a bad

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habit

that is

affect

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in

healthy

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life

.

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, at

this

time elders and

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have many problems with their style pattern, if the community

center

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and government decided to improve

quality

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of

life

for

people

by spread awareness for impact

sports

exercise in their bodies as well as for

enhance

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their children healthy.

Secondly

, schools play an important role in

this

issue, because the pupils are interaction with other kids more time rather than in their home.

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, the reason for

administration

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of schools is important by adding more

sports

classes into the school curriculum, as well as encouraging their students to participate in many extra-curriculum activities that will

be enhance

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lifestyle

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the lifestyle

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for kids.

Therefore

, parents will be

a

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role

model

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when encourage their children to do activities that will

be increase

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increase

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public health.

In conclusion, to deal with an increasing

an increasing

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population and overweight

people

changing the lifestyle that will

be produce

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new generation

awareness

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of awareness

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for

sport

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life

and

impact

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the impact

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that is

in

life

.

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