The descripted two pie charts depict the domiciliary energy usage of Australian people by means of the household appliances and the amount of detrimental gases caused by each direction of energy use.

The

first

chart shows that while the heating requires the highest utilization of

energy

power,

controversely

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, cooling system is the appliance demanding the lowest rate of

energy

as 2% and

also

manufacturing the minimum amount of greenhouse gases. Water heating stands out in the

second highest

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place with

one

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third

percentage in the side of

energy

usage,

although

it is the most detrimental appliance that

produce

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the most of the greenhouse gas emissions.

According to the proportions of

energy

use, three

direction

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such

as the refrigeration, lighting and other appliances cause approximately two times more gas emissions than the quantity of

energy

utilization of those devices.

Overall, it seems that depending on variations on the rate of household

energy

use, the dose of greenhouse gas emissions revealing to the atmosphere changes and that dependence between usage of

energy

and percentage of gases can be inversely proportional in certain directions.

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