Smoking is the most destructive unhealthy habit mankind ever witnessed. Most
in
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society are well aware of the harm it does to their body.
, people are so reluctant to stop that habit.
essay will discuss
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the two main causes for
issue and
suggests the solutions for these causes.
One of them is the lack of awareness about the alternatives
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reduction. Most
believe that smoking is the best solution to relieve the
that they face in their daily life.
, we see a lot of corporate employees smoking during their working hours to beat the
they face due to their hectic work schedule. But, in my
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it is their ignorance about the art of managing
in an effective way.
The best solution to
issue is to try intermittent meditation, which can be
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literally by sitting
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and at any time.
, by
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, the mind can be relaxed and will be charged to perform effectively.
The
main cause for
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reluctance towards quitting smoking is their weak will power. Majority of the
must have tried quitting smoking at least once in their
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. Yet, they couldn_t withstand
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the withdrawal symptoms for longer. So,
is the reason they were never able to quit smoking. In fact, a recent survey conducted by the ITC has proved the same. One effective solution that the government could provide for
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society is to promote the
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helper products like _No Nicotine_ which helps in causing the same effect of
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cigarette without actually smoking one.
To conclude,
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making
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society aware of these alternative and
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boosting the individual_s will power and the determination to quit smoking can really make
habit vanish.
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