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opulation is alarmingly increasing throughout the world and due to
, people are facing a lot of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many others. Whereas, there are few reasons behind
tremendous growth in
. In my opinion,
is the biggest problem faced by humanity. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.
, there are certain reasons behind the rise in
, one of the prominent reason for
is illiteracy among people because poor people do not have adequate knowledge to understand the biological situation.
, in most of the backward societies
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people give birth to more than 2 children.
, South Africa is the highest in terms of
because of its illiteracy and lack of awareness.
, some traditional families are following
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atriarchy system in which their upcoming generation will take their culture ahead in future.
is the major reasons for
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ncrease in birth rate which leads to a huge
, there are several problems which humans are facing because of
increase in inhabitants causes scarcity of resources
as minerals, fuels, crops, and other natural resources.
, many people don_t have
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ob, because there is high competition and companies don_t have a vacancy for new people.
, India is extremely high in
and due to
poverty rate is
high as they don_t have proper labour.
, these are the serious issues which cannot be ignored and these problems may
lead to criminal activities because individuals are finding an alternate solution for survival.
To sum up, in my opinion
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humanity is facing critical problems because of
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ncrease in the world_s
, the nation should find the possible solution for
it will to lead to major complications for all.
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