Teenagers in some nations work at jobs while they are still in school. Do you think it is a good idea for students to have jobs ? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer

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In

this

contemporary era, due to increasing costliness, an expenditure of families are

also

increasing and in

result

, sometimes its become hard to cope with situations when there is only one earning hand in the whole family.

That is

why, nowadays, youngsters in many countries do part-

time

jobs after their school timing to support the family.I believe that it_s a good development but have some demerits as well.

The

first

and foremost is that most of the times, juveniles do part-

time

jobs to support their parents and to pay their expenses especially when their parents are not able to pay a high amount of educational fees. It is the best way to tackle the hard situation, in

result

, they become more mature and disciplined in

life

.

For example

, according to educationalists of the USA, off-springs who spend their leisure

time

to helping their family in any way, always become a disciplined person and better citizens of the nation.

Secondly

, by doing part-

time

jobs they get chance to inculcate new skills which may become their career path as in adulthood.Sometimes by doing a part-

time

job

they develop an interest in a particular

job

which is substantially beneficial for them as people spend years to find their career path.

For instance

, one of my cousin, who born and brought in Canada, started doing a part-

time

job

as a photographer during earlier, now he is an eminent photographer in his city.

Moreover

,by working with highly skilled professionals they get chance to learn business skills, money management which increase their analytic thinking and cognitive skills.

On the other hand

, a part-

time

job

may hamper their study and health due to overburden if they spend more

time

on the

job

after school timings. After tiring from the

job

, they must be not able to concentrate on their study and

this

loss may give a detrimental impact on their mental health.

In addition

, they may lose their feeling of being a child as they do not get

time

to play and do their favourite activities.

For instance

, according to psychologists, it_s essential for children to spend some

time

on activities they adore. The children who do temporary jobs, mostly become mature in early age, in

result

loss of childish behaviour and grave feeling of distressed and disappointment of

life

.

Besides

this

, they do not get

time

to spend with family and siblings.

To conclude,children who do part-

time

work gain a lot of new skills, disciplined

life

, in

result

, a better human being who lives a balanced

life

.

However

, it_s vital to fix the hours of work not more than 4 hours in a day, so that they can make a fine balance in

life

.

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