technology provides us a lot of means to communicate. but now that people have the ability to talk to each other in a wider variety of methods, our communication and social abilities have taken a step back. why does technological advance hurt nontechnical communication? how can we solve this problem?

In

this

era of modern

technology

,

people

has

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different ways to communicate with one another.

This

results in

majority

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of the population losing its ability to socialize and interact with each other in person.

This

essay will discuss why

technology

has made interpersonal

communication

lessen compared to before and offer

solution

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on how to prevent it.

Almost everyone has access to

smartphones

and

good

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internet connection. Most

people

use it to communicate with friends and family

irregardless

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of the distance. With just

few

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clicks on the screen,

message

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will be sent to the recipient without needing to go outside and interact personally.

Consequently

, frequent usage of

smartphones

especially

of

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text messages decreases a person_s ability to socialize and interact personally without the help of

technology

.

However

, something can be done to prevent

technology

from taking full control of our non-technological

communication

skills.

Firstly

,

people

should limit their usage of

the

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smartphones

especially if communicating

people

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with people

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nearby.

For instance

,

instead

of spending hours chatting with friends over the phone, it will be better to meet in person in a coffee shop and practice conversation in person.

Moreover

, joining clubs and groups can help improve

the

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non-technical

communication

skills. Participation in a group of

people

on

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in

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your leisure time

instead

of spending hours on

the

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smartphones

will greatly improve

our

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social skills.

In my conclusion, easy access to gadgets like

smartphones

has made

communication

for everyone easier.

However

, it has made

people

_s social abilities declined. One way to solve

this

is to limit the utilization of

smartphones

through dining out with friends as well as joining clubs and groups that

promotes

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interaction with other

people

.

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