Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

Youngsters are taken a gap to work or travel across the world before embarking on their formal University education.

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gap year in the subsequent paragraphs and with my opinion in the conclusion.

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with, by taking

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students

not only get

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to explore the world but

also

discover their interests. It helps to know

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real life

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situations. A survey conducted by

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Harvard University has revealed that twenty-

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of

students

drop out who headed straight to the college.Apart from

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, working for a period help them to accumulate the funds which

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to bear the expense of their education which ultimately reduce the financial burden of parents.

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, there

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potential

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with taking a break. Some

students

can lose

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interests

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from studies.

Students

find it very enjoyable ultimately they shun their studies.

To conclude, the break of a year taken before pursuing university studies helps

students

to discover their career

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and

also

allows them to consolidate financially.

However

, for a minority of high school

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it can lead to an end of an academic career .

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