Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree

In the current society, unhealthy

food

are

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more welcomed among families,

People

are starting to talk about

this

habit

more

offen

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. Some

people

think that

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government

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goverment

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the goverment

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should increase

tax

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the tax

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on unhealthy

food

to

encourge

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encourage

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people

to start eating healthy. In

this

essay, I tend to disagree

this

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opinion.

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with, there are

varities

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of

food

that

people

can choose,unhealthy

food

,

such

as Pizza, french fries, hamburgers, they are so

decilious

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delicious
deciduous

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though it is unhealthy. not

adusing

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abusing
using

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eating among families

wont

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won’t

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‘ be harmful. Should government just simply increase tax on unhealthy

food

, it absolutely raised up the cost , leading

living

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to living

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cost

challenage

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for some poor families,

that

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is unfair for them.

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, it is

also

about

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eating

habit

,

For instance

, if some of

people

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the people

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are vegans that they never eat meat nor unhealthy

food

, doesn’t mean that they will be

helathy

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healthy

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.

However

,

instead

of increasing taxes on

unhealthey

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unhealthy

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food

,

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goverment

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shall raise

people

‘s awareness that how important for

people

to eat

healthy

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healthily

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.

For example

,

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goverment

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can make some

advertisement

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advertisements

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in public,

such

as

busess

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business
buses

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, some banners. or invite famous

people

to make

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speech

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speeches

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for influence. which will be much

efficient

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more efficient

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for

people

to change their idea and start to care about their eating

habit

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habits

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.

To conclude,

There

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are varieties of methods to teach

people

to eat

healthy

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healthily

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,

bying

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buying
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increasing taxes on unhealthy definitely not the good way. In my opinion,

government

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shall put more speeches or

adverstiments

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advertisements

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to raise

people

‘s awareness that how much impact it can be

to

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them if their eating

habit

is healthy.

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