People have different views about whether
should be closed due to cruelty or remain to save endangered species. While I believe that
have advantages to rare
, and I would like to discuss both
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views as below.
On the one hand, some people highlighted those wild
are born to live free, and it is unnatural and intrinsically cruel to keep them in captivity in
.
, extensive ranges of
are suffering from mental illness in
.
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conducted by a
rights group of more than 80
nationwide suggested that those
that kept in captivity in
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are 100 times smaller than the minimum home range in their natural habitat are more likely to suffer from abnormal and self-destructive behaviours –
, pacing, walking in
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circle than those who can rove freely in their natural habitats.
,
have provided safe habitats, well-trained zookeepers, and a nurturing environment for taking care of those endangered species that struggling in the wild for many years.
, those creatures can be encouraged to reproduce with professional medical care in a safe
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. A good example would be
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, an adorable creature
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is
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significant animal in China that almost people from worldwide love. In my opinion,
case could prove that
are working to protect
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rare
from extinction.
In conclusion, I do agree that
_ management needs to be improved in terms of
_ welfare, while I still believe that
are necessary for wild
.
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