some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the birth of the earth,

water

is a fundamental resource for each and every species.

However

, there are

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two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that each individual

have

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their own

birth right

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on

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usage

,

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of

iys

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quantity

; other emphasizes that authorities ought

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manage the use of drinkable

water

as its

quantity

is limited. In my view, under the natural cycle of freshwater, the consumption always

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behind the

quantity

.

Fundamentally, various factors make a section of society

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that they have fundamental right on the

usage

of crystal clear

water

, and there are various reason to substantiate. One of them is that

the

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life is unimaginable without liquid. In order words, to keep

b

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ody up and to maintain the metabolism of the digestive system balance, the

water

is the most important natural component.

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, the human

body

is made up of 70%

water

, which

result

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in the need

of

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water

in every single passing day.

For instance

, the survey conducted by the university of

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west reveals that the

body

of a human

live

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without food for

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one month, but deficiency of

water

might break out the power of

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ody in just two days.

On the other hand

, some people believe that municipal authorities must take care of

water

since the supply is limited. Chiefly, nowadays, it is often seen that people

ise

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freshwater for inappropriate works,

such

as washing car, house cleaning and many more. For which, many people think governments should keep an eagle eye on the

water

supply.

Nevertheless

, the annual rainfall in many countries, like India, cross the limit of domestic

usage

by two times, which make individuals

to

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use as much

water

they want without

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hesitation.

Moreover

, in Canada,

for example

, the freshwater initiated from the

sea

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water

by filtration.

As a result

, the

usage

quantity

of drinkable

water

does not mind the government.

In conclusion,

although

water

is the basic need of humans and some express concern about its shortage,

but

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the source of

freshwater

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, as rainfall, gives the sizable share for domestic use.

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