Some people think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think the government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

It is believed that government focus should be on economy

improvement

, whereas, others think social services

such

as health and education systems are more important to be focused on. I agree to focus on the economic

system

, and I will talk about my reasons.

Firstly

, economic

system

is a significant element for developing country and should be priority to work on it, because it is about balance between people_s income and their expenses and ease their life and no more homeless exists. All these features are related to a great economy.

For example

, if an economical

system

is formulated and implemented in the country, people have jobs to fulfil their basic needs of food, clothing, and house,

Also

, there is enough resources to develop other social services.

Therefore

, concentration on economic should be prioritised.

Secondly

,

economic

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the economic system

system

has a cycle that

need

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needs

to be

work

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working

well to have

constant

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constantly

improve

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improved

.

In other words

, by keeping focus on economic, and

improvement

, nations can think about

traveling

the act of going from one place to another
travelling

, sports, entertaining, socialising and saving that allows them to make come true their wishes,

for instance

, marriage and wedding party.

Moreover

,

this

circle brings stability to

economic

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the economic system

system

and influence other aspects of

people life

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a person_s life
person_s life
peoples_ life

such

as their physical and mental health.

That is

why economy

improvement

is vital.

In conclusion, having an effective economic

system

is a fundamental of developing a country and has priority to social services. Since, it paves the way to have a better life for the whole nation and continual

improvement

that lead to have a better social services as well.

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