Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers.rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the concurrent world, schooling is the most important part of life. A group of people

believe

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believes

that schooling is the best way to train children to become a good

mamber

one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
member
members

of society as well skill employee.

Therefore

, more

marits

the world of commercial activity where goods and services are bought and sold
markets

are their own life.

However

,

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,

I agree with

this

statement. I would

discussed

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discuss

in

ensuing paragraph

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the ensuing paragraphs
ensuing paragraphs

.
Focusing on the primary view, several people

are think

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have thought
think
are thought

that

main benefits

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the main benefits

are Schools is

best part

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the best part

of children. Because of, they learn

field

subject as

well some

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well, some

vocational skill, discipline, moral values about life lessons.

Besides

this

, if children

is understand

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understand
are understanding

values

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the values

of education,

then

they set the goal about their dream and

also

become a good member of society. To

examplify

be characteristic of
exemplify

, Shivam

has learn

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has learned

in school and they learn a good

skills

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skill

.

Therefore

,

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,

their skills are make a well known

aritists

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artist
artists

in the nation. They achieve a good artist of the

nation

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nationally

award.

On the other hand

, some primitive steps are individual on

a

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an

interested skills and

also

learn their subject related knowledge.

Therefore

, children set their goal and preparing

on

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for

their interested

field

. In additional, either children can achieve of good score with graduate their

field

or more opportunity for

good job

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a good job
good jobs

in a multinational company.

Moreover

, there are more merits for their performance in

job

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the job
a job

. If they work as a good employee and their ability with

skills

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skills, then

then

more chance to achieve higher salary package as well as more facility provided by their companies.

for

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For

instance

kunjan

is a

best

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good
better

skill for

maintenance mechanical

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maintenance, mechanical

petrochemical valve.

they

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They

solve every problem related to

this

field

because of their well known person about

this

product.

so

to a very great extent or degree
So

, many

company

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companies

provide many

facility

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facilities

as well highest salary package.

it

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It

is individual merits for

kunjan

.
To conclude, it can

finally

said

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say

that school is a best part

for

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of
in

learn

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learning

descriptive skills and

good education

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a good education

to interest filled with make

good person

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a good person
good people

in society as well achieved best job.

Therefore

, some personally benefits because of their skills helps to become a well known person as well lives their own dream lifestyle.

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