Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the most topical issues in modern society is problems associated with

pollution

. People have different views about whether the usage of transports or industrial growth is responsible for

such

issues. While the dramatic increase of cars has

also

some causes for it, I believe that industrial developments are the primary source of

pollution

.
On the one hand, the number of cars in

metropolitans

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metropolitan

areas

are rising

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is rising

significantly, causing more detrimental effects on

environment

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the environment

. Because many big cities are witnessing a drastic climb in the consumption of fuels by dint of

this

, emitting poisonous gases to

air

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the air

may have negative consequences. Taking China as an example, where the air of the country is deteriorated by the virtue of cars and factories, urging the people to wear protective masks to avoid health problems but it is not a solution. Thanks to

revolutionized

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revolutionize

technologies and renewable energies that are being utilized to prevent

pollution

. If all metropolises substitute the cars for solar-powered and eco-friendly cars, it will highly likely be very effective way to discourage

pollution

.

On the other hand

, much

pollution

, which is produced by transports, is not leading to a huge cause of ecosystem. The culprit may be the discharge of polluting substances into the atmosphere owing to the growing manufacturing industries.

Nowadays more

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Nowadays, more

and more new factories are being erected in order to provide the population with necessities

such

as food, clothes and so on. If governments adopt new policies and implement them to supervise the industrial waste, it can really limit the

pollution

.
In conclusion, I can understand why people might think that

cars

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car

usage has effects that are avoidable, but it seems to me that

increasing number

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an increasing number

of factories

has

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have

a long-term result

on

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in

ecosystem.

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