Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an opinion that parents are responsible for

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of their

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, but

also

, there are has

a

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opportunity views that

school

is play

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a

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main role in

children

‘s

life

. What regards

to

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my opinion, I think that as

family

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a family

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, as

school

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should take care of offspring’s

life

.

Firstly

, mother and father are

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example

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for their heir from their birth. It is can not off responsible from them. They should have to be

right

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people to bring up their

children

and to grow dignity person.

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, they must

to

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learn their

children

with

right

things,

such

as how to use good manners, that they need to respect old people and animals, other people, to share with others

with

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some things and to be intelligent

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every where

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.

Moreover

, they ought to learn

them

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to defend themselves at

school

and other places,

also

in different situations.

However

, schools are

not

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exception

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, because the

children

spend more time

at

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there.

Children

are faced other students and talk with them.

Teachers

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necessary to observe

a

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behaviour of

children

and to direct

to

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righ

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way. They have to point them other aspects of

life

, which

children

are not given by parents.

Therefore

, classmates and environment are affected to person’s character and some

life

principles.

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, with good friends student finds

right

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a right

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way, but if he

forced

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with not good students, his situation is sad and he can use narcotics and

other harmful thing

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when he will

teenager

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.

In

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summarise, I have made a conclusion that both parents and

school

are very important in

life

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the life

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of every child. Everybody

are

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is

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example

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for them. They grow watching them and copying their behaviours, considering that it is good and

right

. So, I think that all need to bring up themselves

firstly

, after that the

children

, to form

worthy

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community.

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