Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

Some people suppose that the

government

is the only factor which can

influent

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence

on

society

considerably, whereas others state that individuals can play an important role in social impact.

To

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In

my mind, I consider the effect on

society

of individuals as remarkable as the

government

.

First

of all, the

government

has its

own effective

Accept comma addition
own, effective

methods to control and improve

society

.

In particular

, the

government

issues some policies for citizen_s benefits

such

as social welfare

policy

, economic

policy

. For

instant

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an instant

, the

government

proposes the education

policy

which popularizes education for all classes in

soceity

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society

;

Therefore

, the poor can have an opportunity to study.

This

is really a useful

policy

helping

society

erase illiteracy and creating equality as well.

Furthermore

, the

government

has its technique in order to maintain order and social security. People in

society

can not

can not
cannot

be safe, nor the police force is not established. The police force protects

people

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the people

from robberies, and dangerous criminals.

In addition

to, the

government

expands relationships with other countries gradually which may bring people a lot of good chances. Through these good relationships, the citizens can get many scholarships, job opportunities, convenient exportation and many other benefits.

Nevertheless

, the

government

can undermine

society

because of adverse policies. If the

government

sets a very high tax rate

instead

of reasonable tax,

society

may become unstable because of

citizens

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citizen

discontent.

Secondly

, it is undeniable that individuals affect on

society

directly as well as indirectly. The good individuals can contribute directly to

society

by complying with the law. They can merely be observant of the traffic law, or they can pay taxes in full and on time. One person

can not

can not
cannot

have considerable influence, but the majority of people can change

society

.

For example

, if everyone has the sense to stop and move in traffic lights, traffic congestion may be eliminated. In the other hand,

society

may be worsened because of

bad sense

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the bad sense

of people.

Moreover

, the individuals can

also

contribute to

society

by having an impact on the

government

. They can choose the person who can be good authorities in the

government

and can create some realistic methods to improve

society

through an election.

In conclusion,

although

there are many different points of view about the impact on

society

between the

government

and individuals, I personally claim that these factors play the same important role in

change

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changing

society

.

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