Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Music

has sparked much debate in general public opinion. Some people believe that

music

has cr

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a crucial role

n society. Whereas, ot

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others

ontend that it is ty

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a type
the type

f entertainment which has used in leisure time. I put forth both sides of argument and explain the items have shaped my view to support the former perspective.
Convincing arguments can be made that,

music

has a host of benefits. It is not fair to overlook the advantages of

music

.

First

and for most, these modern-da

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day
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ife deeply require some activities that help them to reveal their daily anxiety which is the grave consequence of their chosen lifestyle.

Furthermore

,

music

ch

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cheers

eople up and help them create themselves free time to being re

lax a

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relaxed
relaxing

nd enjoy their time.

As a result

, we live in the world which is require ample activates to help people recharge their ba

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batteries

nd become re

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refreshed

or the days ahead.
On the other side, it is obvious that,

music

is a form of entertainment that easily linked us to our s and traditions,

additionally

prepare the atmosphere that en

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enjoys

ur gathering that we have.

Besides

, enable people sh

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to share

ifferent tastes of

music

with others. The other point noteworthy is ,

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,

music

helps us express our fe

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feelings

asily. Ul

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Ultimately, I

irmly believe that,

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music, even

lays the pivotal role more than the simple entertainment and boost our feeling and emotion as well.
In a nutshell, by considering the reasons which have mentioned the above, we widely recognized that how vital role

music

has in our hustle and bustle life.
Donya Taghizadeh Maleki (academic)

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