Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country_s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country_s success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

The relative success of different

country

is usually defined in economic terms. I think it is not the only thing to asses a

country

. In my opinion, there are

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other

important things

such

as

education

and good

environment

.

Firstly

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer
I

want to say that standard of

education

, health, and individual human rights certainly be considered when measuring a

country

_s status. A good

education

system is important for the development of any nation. With

great

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a great education

education

in schools, colleges, and universities, they can produce the best quality of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision is

also

an indicator of the standard of living within a

country

,

this

can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates and availability of medical services.

Secondly

, the good

environment

can plays

Suggestion
can play

important role

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an important role
important roles

. Any

country

cannot consider

it self

reflexive from of “it”
itself

at

top

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the top

if it lacks in healthier citizens and has unsafe

environment

to live in.

For example

, if the

environment

has a lot of

trashes

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trash

in any places,

this

can become a disease to many people, not only in their own

country

but can affect to another

country

.

Moreover

, if the government

do not take

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does not take

steps to

migitate

lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate

crime in the

country

and it keeps people in fear. So

i

refers to the speaker or writer
I

think, all these factors highly count while measuring

country

_s success.

In conclusion, The economic growth reflects

country_s prosperity

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the country_s prosperity

, but the other factors

such

as

education

and food

environment

should

also

be considered. But

i

refers to the speaker or writer
I

would

agrue

present reasons and arguments
argue
agree
agreed

that the standard of a

country

_s

education

system is the best measure of its success.

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