Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion

Cars

and

bicycles

are provided to

use

as travellers’ vehicles in a city. Some

people

believe that one of them is more useful than the other one. In my opinion,

cars

are better for

use

in a city.

First

of all,

cars

are more convenient. They have made after bicycle, so they have more options. One of these facilities is pace.

For example

, When you can get to your destination faster by car, you

use

the car to reach on

time

. In the new era,

time

is an important factor of life and

cars

are saving our

time

by going faster and faster. Indeed, they save our

time

and they are more convenient

also

. So we can find some rest and

time

even during the route of destination.

Although

,

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traffic is a negative factor for

time

-saving, you can escape it by going outside in none rush

time

.

On the other hand

, some

people

say that

bicycles

are providing good weather without pollution for us.

Moreover

, they believe that

,

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this

kind of vehicle not only is useful for the body by its cycling, but

also

it has a positive point in our mind due to inhaling fresh air.

For instance

, some

people

in the countryside who

use

bicycles

are healthier than those in cities that

use

cars

But in my idea, if you travel by bicycle in urban you can not reach your destination on

time

,

thus

you can not do all your jobs in the exact

time

.

Therefore

your mind will be influenced by

this

.

Furthermore

, doing jobs in the cities need more mind power, so you do not have enough physical power to cycle.

In conclusion,

bicycles

are not convenient and fast as

cars

.

Cars

are more useful in cities while

people

in the countryside can

use

bicycles

as better vehicles.

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