Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some men and women believe

that is

more beneficial to motivate kids for

competition

. While others feel

that is

better to become children supportive

in contrast

of rivalry. I believe that

competition

are

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is

important for pupils_ to become smart and

practical but

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practical, but

, cooperate are

more important

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most important

for that, because it will helpful for teamwork like, class project, internship, group discussion, etc.

First

of all, numbers of people are frequently argued that the competitive natures are very helping

to

being one more than one
two

kids. The reason for

this

, while the children take a part into

competition they

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competition, they

will learn a lot of real life things and develop a skill to face the challenges.

For example

, my friend has a stage

fear but

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fear, but

, at the

last

year he was participating in dance

competition

program which is organized

into

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in

our school.

Initially

, he felt

hesitation

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hesitation, although

although

, his

team

members_ encouraged him and he was successfully

complete

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completed

his dance. So, If

competition

is not exist

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does not exist
doesn_t exist
has not existed

in our life.

Thus

, we

are not strongly face

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are not strongly facing
are not strongly faced
have not strongly faced

some challenges.

The

next

argue is that taught the cooperation is more

important compare to development

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important to compare the development
important compare to the development

of

competition

sense into

pupils

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the pupils

.

Also

, I believe that learn of cooperative

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour

to girls and boys are more beneficial because, when younger have a supportive attitude they will be able to working with

team

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the team
a team
teams

and strangers

also

.

This

skill will help them to make their career as well as personal life like, making a

friends

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friend

, work with

team

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a team
the team
teams

, communication with unknown people, etc.

for

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For

instance, by the

last

month_s article of times of India newspaper, the figure is described more than 90% company hired those people who have

team work ability

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the team work ability

.

Then

, learned the skill of

cooperative

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the cooperative
cooperatives

is must necessary

as a result

of, kids become more valuable adults.

In conclusion, I feel that the value of cooperation is more useful for pupils to become

good

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better

human beings, rather than encouragement for

competition

.

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