Some people think it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that children should grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The majority of individuals

favor

promote over another
favour

the cities in order to provide better amenities for the young ones.In the

first

place, metropolis have

first

-rated health facilities and education;

therefore

a child could get

best

Suggestion
the better
the best

of both while residing in cities.

besides

Suggestion
Besides

this

, in urban areas, there would be much security as compared to villages as there are watchman and city police at every nook and corner.

hence

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence

less

crimes

Suggestion
crime

related to the adolescents.

Despite these benefits, I support the ones who prefer the countryside over towns for growing toddlers. Convincing ideas can be made in various ways. The

first

and foremost is the environment, because of pollution-free climate in rural areas. Which, in turn, saves children from various ailments

such

as cancer and skin problems caused by major air pollution in the cities. Not only for health purposes but

also

the sake of culture and traditions, villages are much better than

cosmopolition

growing or occurring in many parts of the world
cosmopolitan

as

adoloscents

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents

learn their basics and stick to s in

villages

Suggestion
the villages

.

In conclusion, after

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing

different

ascpects

a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspects
aspect

,

Accept space
,

it can be asserted that

,

Accept space
,

although

cities have their benefits, the countryside is proved to be a safe and natural place for the little ones.

Thus

,

Accept space
,

I, firmly, opine that a child should be raised in the lap of nature.

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