There is no doubt that government must have a check on activities that are hazardous to the lives of the community of the country. Due to
, some believe that the state must restrict perilous sporting events like skydiving and
, I disagree with
view and would
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explain why I do so, in
of all, let us try to understand why the public wants a ban on adventurous activities like skydiving and
climbing. At a young
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there is a feeling to take adrenaline to its peak;
, youngsters get into
sometimes results in fatal accidents and injuries. So, these
are expected to be checked by the law so as to safeguard the lives of
youth and their families.
hardly contribute anything to society, which nation think is the duty of the younger generations. So to save them from the dangers of
fun and their role towards the community, the laws must strictly govern
Now let us have a look at the other view, youth in every generation has pushed the limits of human capabilities. Athletics
as skydiving and
climbing leads to develop a strong body as well as minds. With the increasing craze in the new generation, these
have started contributing to the economy of the nation. Even young people nowadays are attracted to tourism with the help of
. The modern gears have
into safe ones;
, deaths due to
are way less the death that happens in road accidents every year. So,
must be encouraged as per my view.
like sky diving and
climbing seem dangerous to some, I would disagree with it because the modern safety gears and training have made it safer and they
contribute to the economy by encouraging travel and tourism amongst younger crowds.
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