Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behavior while others say the amount of time children they spend watch TV influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people suggest that the content of what children watch on

TV

impacts on their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour

while the opponents of

this

idea claim that how much

time

children spend watching

television

that an effect on their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour

. Personally, I think both of these factors can have an impact on a child_s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour

, especially when the two factors are combined.
On the one hand, nowadays, there are a lot of programs televised on

TV

have inappropriate contents.

Television

programmes and commercials these days are full of graphic violence, sex scenes

an

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a

sexual

connotations

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connotation

, amongst other topics that are considered unsuitable for children_s viewing. Movie cartoons in which

children

Suggestion
children_s

interest everyday have full of

violence

Accept comma addition
violence, such

such

as Family Guy, South Park, Pokemon,

etc

continuing in the same way
etc.

so when children watch

TV

regularly, they will be exerted an influence too much.

Thus

, the parents have to manage and concern what their offsprings are following on

television

.

On the other hand

, not only does the content of what children watch affect their

behavior but

Accept comma addition
behaviour, but
behaviour but

also

how much

time

they spend watching

television

. In the modern society, it is very common to say that children spend a lot of hours with their eyes glued to the

television

screen so they do not have a serve lack of outdoor activity and exercise

such

as playing with their peers, bonding with families finding their own aspirations in life which are vital for

child_s well-being

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a child_s well-being
the child_s well-being

and development.
In conclusion, I believe that both what children watch and how much

time

they use to watch

television

can impact their behaviour.

Government

Suggestion
The government

should control the quality of the programme content before broadcasting on

TV

.

Furthermore

, parents need to limit

time

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the time

that their children spend watching

TV

everyday

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every day

to avoid the negative implications that affect on their child_s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour

.

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