Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to leave how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people feel that

children

should spend their spare time doing

group

activities

; others opine that

children

should find ways to keep themselves busy on their own. In my opinion, both options have their merits and demerits.

Engaging in organized

group

activities

is certainly beneficial for

children

. To start with,

such

activities

are safe because

children

will almost always have someone to supervise them while they play.

Also

, they can learn several valuable skills like team spirit and cooperation when they play a team sport or get involved in a

group

activity.

For

example

, when

children

play a sport like

a

Correct article usage
apply

It seems that article use may be incorrect here.

show examples

football or

cricket

Change the article
a cricket

It appears that the article usage in the phrase cricket is incorrect. Consider making a change.

show examples

, they learn the importance of working with their teammates to achieve their common goal.

Such

skills will benefit them in the future. These

activities

also

enhance the confidence levels and interpersonal skills of

children

.

On the flip side, it is not always possible to participate in

group

events. There are times when a child is left alone.

For

example

, his friends could be busy with their studies and cannot play with him. Since

such

situations can arise every now and

then

, every child should be able to keep themselves occupied doing their own things.

For

example

, they could read, write or paint. These

activities

not only keep them engaged

,

Remove the comma
apply

The comma before the conjunction but also appears to be unnecessary. Consider removing it.

show examples

but

also

help them discover their hidden talents.

The important downside to spending time alone is that

children

may use it for unproductive

activities

.

For

example

, if they are left alone most

children

will just sit glued to their television or computer.

This

practice, unfortunately, does not help them in any way.

To conclude, it is important for

children

to find a way to keep themselves occupied on their own.

However

, parents should

also

encourage them to engage in

group

activities

because

such

activities

help to improve their health and overall personality.

Be the first to comment

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published.


*