Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that an individual dressing says a lot about their personality and culture. I strongly agree with

this

statement. In

this

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I will give some reasons along with examples that how clothes play important role in recognition of a

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tradition.

Firstly

, many

people

invariably wear clothes according to their tradition ,for they represent their religion by it. There are many cultures and traditions in the same religions of

people

who respect what are they wearing, and especially the

color

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of the dressing matters to them depending on different genders.

For instance

, in Pakistan majority of

people

are Muslims,

however

, there are a variety of traditions and cultures for separate areas and provinces. Like in

province

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of Punjab everyone has their own style of dressing.

Similarly

in KPK appearance of

people

is very different as compared to Punjab or any other province. To illustrate, males cannot wear dark

colors

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such

as, red,pink and orange while

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the female
a female

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female

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can wear the same

color

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.

Furthermore

,

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wear trousers, long shirt along with scarf which is not worn by

people

of other areas.

Secondly

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by

clothes

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an individual personality can

also

be judged very easily because it is an overall look of every person which he/she selects for themselves.

For example

, many

people

who wear bright

colors

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with fitted stitching are mostly lively and fashionable.

In contrast

, those who wear loose and light

colors

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are boring and dull.

Besides

those who are always suited if they are going for

job

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are the punctual and tidy

people

.

After having discussed the pertinent points it can be inferred that

appearance

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of a person can predict their culture as well as character. In my opinion, dressing depicts a person’s personality and religion and we should always respect everyone clothing.

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