Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes . Do you agree or disagree?

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a lot about their personality and culture. I strongly agree with

this

statement. In

this

essay

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I will give some reasons along with examples that how clothes play

pivotal

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role in recognition of a

person

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tradition.

Firstly

, many

people

invariably wear clothes according to their tradition ,for they represent their religion by it. There are many cultures and traditions in the same religions of

people

who

respects

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what are they wearing, and especially the

color

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of the dressing matters to them depending on different genders.

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,

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of

people

are Muslims,

however

, there are a variety of traditions and cultures for separate areas and provinces. Like in

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of Punjab everyone has their own style of dressing.

Similarly

in KPK appearance of

people

is very difficult as compared to Punjab or any other province. To illustrate,

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the male
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male

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cannot wear dark

colors

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such

as red.,pink and orange while

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the female
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female

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can wear the same

colors

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.

Furthermore

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wear trousers, long shift along with scarf which

is sometimes not wore

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by other area

people

.

Secondly

, by

clothing

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an individual personality can

also

be judged very easily because t is an overall look of every

person

which he/she selects for themselves.

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, many

people

who wear bright

colors

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with fitted stitching are mostly lively and fashionable.

In contrast

, those who wear loose and light

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colors

are boring and dull.

Besides

those who are always suited if they are going for

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are the punctual and tidy

one

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.

After having discussed the

perinent

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points it can be inferred that appearance of a

person

can predict their culture as well as character. In my

opinion

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dressing depicts a

person

‘s

personalty

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and religion and we should always respect everyone clothing.

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