Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living with in big cities? What solutions can be taken to solve those problems??

8 April 2022 IELTS IN EASY STEPS Writing 0

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It is often said that in the sprawling city is too

difficulty

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difficult

to live in

appropriate way

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an appropriate way
appropriate ways

.

This

essay will suggest that the principal cause of

this

issue

is enhance in the

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is enhancing the
is enhancing in the
is enhanced in the

migration from the rural areas and provides the jobs in

backwardness

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backward

area as a viable solution followed by a reasoned conclusion.

The main cause of the bad conditions of living in the cities are being overcrowded. Due to lack of amenities in the rural area, people are moving to the metro cities.

Such

as, for university education, jobs

,

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,

medical treatment

so on

in the near future
soon

. In the cities

,

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,

individuals have own cars and bumper-to-bumper

traffic

is being increased. The volume of

traffic

has raised the pollution in the towns.

This

pollution leads to serious health issues like asthma, respiratory issues, heart diseases so forth.

For example

, Delhi is

most polluted city

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the most polluted city

in

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at

this

time

.

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.

Because of smoky air

,

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people are using the mask for filtering the air.

Infact

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In fact

, Delhi is the

first

city

,

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,

where shop is

opened

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open

for buying the oxygen.

The main practical solution of

this

problem is the government provides the facilities in the rural area. In

this

way, people will less migrate into the cities. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of more vehicles and overuse of it

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in order to; used instead of “to”, especially after try, come, go
and

hopefully raise awareness amongst the public. The raised awareness of the problem would lead changes in the quality of living in the cities

.

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For example

,

china

a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world
China

has started the policy odd and even means one day

odd number

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an odd number

of cars only use in

this

country and

vica

a holding device attached to a workbench; has two jaws to hold workpiece firmly in place
vice

versa

.

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.

This

policy gives many fruitful results to overcome the pollution as well as

traffic

in china.

In summary, the current bad conditions of cities have been caused by migration and

traffic

and with the help of adverts and appropriate policy on how to become healthy life in the cities

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